Diamante Poem by M.Khawar
Diamante Poem
Khawar
Humorous, Kind
Planning, Achieving, Sleeping
Make everyone happy, Never let anyone down
Breathing, Annoying, Overthinking
Angry, Judgemental
Setting Sun
A fine piece of art and great choice of words. Truly an excellent poem. Well done.
ReplyDeleteA great poem by a great author. The fourth line was an accurate explanation of Khawar's personality. Can't wait to read more of/from you
ReplyDeletePoem has depicted him very precisely.title image is icing on cake.flawless and intelligent piece of work has been done by him.great poem
ReplyDeleteAn amazing poem that signifies the character traits of the writer. Beautifully written
ReplyDeleteGreat choice of words. The poem is composed perfectly. The vocabulary, rhythm, flow and contrast is very good.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully and accurately describes just the kind of person you are. I specifically love the fourth line as it perfectly reflects upon your personality. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant rhythm. The poem is a perfect depiction of khawar's personality. Well thought.
ReplyDeleteSimplicity is the beauty of your poem and the picture is exactly mirror of your poem. Brilliant effort!
ReplyDeleteImpressive Work!
ReplyDeleteYour have furnished your poem with the best vocabulary and I have found a rhythmic flow in your poem. You have also conveyed your best quantities and your mysterious weaknesses.
The pic, your name, the last verse; man, the coordination! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem this poem exactly explains your personality it is the best effort
ReplyDeleteAn apt choice of words that truly describes your personality.Really loved the simplicity of your work. Amazing Poem !
ReplyDeleteThis man is one of the few humble students i have met in hostel and this poem is a pure justification of that!!Outstanding words and brilliant man!!!
ReplyDeleteGood choice of words🔥
ReplyDeletePerfect writing 💯
Excellent and brilliant rhythm.
ReplyDeleteA great choice of words which truly depict your personality and also give rhythm to the poem!!
ReplyDeletePerfect poem. It symbolizes your intelligence and correct ideas about yourself
ReplyDeleteYou just did the catharsis of your personality
ReplyDeleteThis poem is nice
ReplyDeleteIt makes me feel I should get up and meet you!
DeleteQuite a vivid description of one's self with words. I love the 3rd verse.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem with a unique choice of words. Seems to describe you in the best way possible
ReplyDeleteActually you are the one whom i like and actually the colours of the different words reflects your multi talented personality
DeleteA masterpiece indeed.A great show of words showing an even greater personality
ReplyDeleteyes, you are really a KHAWAR ..
ReplyDeleteand this poem absolutely depicts your personality.
An eloquent use of vocabulary that speaks volumes about your character. Truly an outstanding poem!
ReplyDeleteMarvellous thoughts and tremendously executed work. It's a wonder that this guy has explained complexity of one's personality and the perplexing task of writing it in very simple words.
ReplyDeleteIt's truly an achievement. Hats off to you man.!!
Just perfect. Nothing I say can truly define its beauty.
ReplyDeleteAwesome little poem right there.Was quite nice and I fancied the sleeping thing most as I myself love to sleep alot.Keep it up brother and best of luck.
ReplyDeleteKhawar you are the reason for smile on many faces,this surely shows your work-ethic and reflects your life,words are perfect love this.
ReplyDeleteEach word of the poem reflects you and you are so amazing brother. You always try to make people smiling.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
This piece describes the meaning of your name to the point that I had goosebumps! I loved the way how you describe myself and throwing in a bit of joke about yourself.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is full of spirit and vigor. Truly a delight to read
ReplyDeleteA flamboyant and lively poem that does an impressive job in depicting your charming and endearing personality .
ReplyDeleteCommendable work👏
Amazing poem Khawar. I really liked your use of words. So magical.
ReplyDeleteAll these words reflect your personality 💯 these words are magical
ReplyDeleteSuch a great way to express yourself.
Marvellous!
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice piece of a poem it is. The stucture is very good and the colours added to its beauty.
A fine piece of poetry. In this poem the author has described his traits in a very good manner.
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